Listen the unspoken..! (Etheree)



Food to eat,

Among the huge crowd…

Heart, searching people,

Having sympathy or

At least having empathy…

Yet, they find no soul to help them..

As they did not stretch their hands in front..

Only their self respect cause them die so hard…!!

Sana Mahin, 2018

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There are many people among us who badly needs help but they don’t ask…out of self respect… They don’t beg..

But if we are unable to understand their need by seeing their eyes… It is very inhumane…. Not everything needs to be explained..! Help them..

This is my first etheree… Etheree is a form of poem… It has ten lines and the first line has 1 syllable and it increases in ascending order till the last line which has 10 syllables…

I want to know…if I’m irritating you all by saying…this is my first..bla bla bla.. hahahaha..! Actually I’m learning new forms…And I need to tell this…may be I’ll get some guidance by this..

Thank you for reading…

Sana Mahin..

17 thoughts on “Listen the unspoken..! (Etheree)

  1. Graci says:

    It’s nice to know that you’re trying different styles. I also like your theme. It is the harsh reality, poverty and hunger. Even here in Aus, in every 5 children who goes to school 1 (has an empty stomach), as the Foodbank says. Well-penned Sana Mahin. πŸ˜‡

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  2. Abhijith Padmakumar says:

    Just beautiful Sana 😊. I am reading an Etheree for the first time πŸ˜‡. I loved it ❀️😊. It has a nice message and your words shine so much πŸ’«βœ¨πŸ˜Š. Thanks for this my friend and do keep writing πŸ˜‡

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